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Author: vincvdwal

src/routes/en/docs/bom-api/+page.svelte

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 	<Alert.Description>
-		BOM is currently upgrading its key platforms and services. As a result, access to open data is
-		temporarily unavailable. We anticipate restoring access soon, allowing Australian citizens to
-		once again benefit from high-resolution forecasts.
+		BOM is currently upgrading its key platforms and services. During this process, open-data
+		delivery has been temporarily suspended. We look forward to BOM resuming open-data access soon
+		so that high-resolution forecasts are once again available to Australian citizens.
 	</Alert.Description>
 </Alert.Root>
 

src/routes/en/docs/cma-api/+page.svelte

@@ -141,9 +141,9 @@
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 	<Alert.Description>
-		Due to recent high demand, CMA’s open-data services are currently experiencing download issues.
-		We hope these issues are resolved soon so the open-data community can once again access CMA
-		weather forecasts.
+		Unfortunately, CMA’s open-data services have been heavily overloaded in recent weeks, making it
+		nearly impossible to download forecasts reliably. We hope these issues are resolved soon so the
+		open-data community can once again access CMA weather forecasts.
 	</Alert.Description>
 </Alert.Root>