Fixes c07 and c24 (#61)

Author: ScrewThisNoise

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/00/58/translation.txt

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 「ほら、見てみろよ。あっちにもカップルがいるぞ。あっ……腕、組んでる……いいなぁ」=Hey, look at this. There's a couple over there too. Ah--... they're walking arm in arm... must be nice.
-「ほら、見てないで俺たちも行こう。……腕、組むか？」=Don't stand and watch, we should go too. ...Wanna link arms?
+「ほら、見てないで俺たちも行こう。……腕、組むか？」=Don't stand and watch, we should go too. ......Wanna link arms?
 「……手なら、いいぞ」=...I don't mind holding hands.
 「さっきから大人しいけど、具合でもわるい？」=You've been pretty quiet for a while now, you feel alright?
 「ち、ちがう！　お前って、見かけより手が硬い。やっぱ男子だよなあ……って」=T-That's not it! Your hand, it's much more solid than it looks. It's so manly... wuh, ignore that.

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/00/66/translation.txt

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 「遅かったね。ん？　それ何？」=You sure took your time. Hm? What's that?
 「いや、ま～た下駄箱に手紙がさぁ……」=Well, someone stuffed a letter in my shoebox again, you see...
 「ラブレターってやつ？」=A love letter?
-「ち、ちがうよ！　今度のは『妹にしてください』とかいう奴だよ！」="N-No, not at all! This time it's more of a Please let me be your little sister deal!"""
+「ち、ちがうよ！　今度のは『妹にしてください』とかいう奴だよ！」=N-No, not at all! This time it's more of a "Please let me be your little sister" deal!
 「そ、そう……相変わらず人気あるね」=I-I see... You're as popular as ever.

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/00/75/translation.txt

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 「どうした？　顔がその……とろけてるぞ？」=What's up? You look kinda... spaced out.
 「私さ、走ってると途中で、頭がボヤっとしてくるんだ」=My head kinda goes blank, whenever I've been running for a while.
-「ランナーズハイって、やつか？」="Is it the so called Runner's High?"""
+「ランナーズハイって、やつか？」=Is it the so called "Runner's High"?
 「うん。これってスッゴイ、気持ちいいんだぞ？　お前もしようぜ？　ハァ、ハァ」=Yah. It feels amazingly good, you know? You ought to try it too. Haa, haa.

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/00/84/translation.txt

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 「へ～、ここがコイカツ部か。つまり恋の勉強をする……のか？」=Heh~, so this is the Koikatsu club, huh. So basically, you study... romance, here?
 「まあ、そうだね」=Yeah, basically.
-「んで、どんなことするんだ？」="So then, what sort of stuff counts as romance?"""
+「んで、どんなことするんだ？」=So then, what sort of stuff counts as "romance"?
 「そうだなぁ……例えばこれ。最近流行りの、壁ドン！」=Good question... For example, pushing someone against the wall, like this! Pretty popular these days.
 「……ちょ、ちょっと……ハハ。ほ、他には？」=...H-Hey, come on... Haha. W-What else you got?

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/00/9/translation.txt

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
-「ん？　ああいいよ。デートだろ？　そんぐらいオッケー……って、デートぉ？！　あのデートをしたいのか！？　わ、私と！」="Hm? Ah, sure. Just a date, right? I don't mind, yeah... wait, a date--?! You mean a date date!? W-With me?!"""
+「ん？　ああいいよ。デートだろ？　そんぐらいオッケー……って、デートぉ？！　あのデートをしたいのか！？　わ、私と！」=Hm? Ah, sure. Just a date, right? I don't mind, yeah... wait, a date--?! You mean a "date" date!? W-With me?!
 「ああ。こういうのは正式に申し込みたかったからさ」=Yeah. I wanted to do atleast this seriously.
 「もちろん良いよ！　私とお前の仲だもんな！　あはは！」=Of course I'm all for it! We're chums, afterall! Ahaha!

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/00/90/translation.txt

@@ -8,6 +8,6 @@
 「いいよ。なんかいざ呼ぶとなると、ちょっと緊張するかも」=Sure. Now that we're actually about to do it, I feel a bit tense.
 「お、思っても口にするな……。えっと……[Pあだ名]」=E-Even if you feel that way, don't say it out loud... Erhm... [Pあだ名].
 「[Hあだ名]」=[Hあだ名].
-「……ん、なんか想像より照れくさいけど、いいもんだな。また呼んでみてもいいか？」=...T-That was way more embarrassing than I thought it'd be, but it felt nice. Can I call you that again sometime?
+「……ん、なんか想像より照れくさいけど、いいもんだな。また呼んでみてもいいか？」=......T-That was way more embarrassing than I thought it'd be, but it felt nice. Can I call you that again sometime?
 「あれ？　これから、ずっと愛称で呼ぶわけじゃないの？」=Huh? We're not calling that each other from now on by default?
 「そ、それは……私にはまだ早い。もっと段階を踏んでからだな、うん」=T-That's... that's still too fast for me. I'd like to get used to it step-by-step, step-by-step.

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/13/97/translation.txt

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 「すぅ……すぅ…………ん、んん……」=*snore*... *snore*... nn, nnnn...
 （んぅ……ん……なにか、やわらかいものが……あたって……？）=(Nnn... nnn... I feel something... real soft...?)
 「…………」=...
-「……って、え？　え？」=...wuh, eh? eh?
+「……って、え？　え？」=......wuh, eh? eh?
 「おはようさん。おっぱいで起こされた気分はどうだ？」=Morning. How does it feel to be woken up by my boobs?
 「えっと……いい気分？」=Erhm... good, I guess?
 「へへっ、そっか。気持ちいいならよかったぜ」=Hehe--, I see. Glad to hear that.

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/20/1002/translation.txt

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
-「……いかん、緊張してきたぞ」=...Damn, this won't do, I'm getting nervous.
+「……いかん、緊張してきたぞ」=......Damn, this won't do, I'm getting nervous.
 （……[H名]は大丈夫かな？　きっと緊張してるよな）=(... Wonder if [H名]'s alright? I bet she's sweating bullets.)
 （無理やり連れてきちゃった感じだし、なんだか申し訳ないな……）=(Feels like shit though, I did just drag her into it...)
 （いよいよ出番か……）=(Showtime, huh...)
 （こ、これは……のまれたら終わりだ……）=(T-This is... If I trip up here, I'm done for...)
 （しっかりしないと……！）=(Gotta get a grip...!)
 （緊張したけど、不恰好にはなってなかったはず……たぶん）=(I was really nervous there but, I'm pretty sure that didn't look too awkward... pretty sure.)
 「これより新婦が入場致します。後方の扉口をご覧ください」=And now, the bride will make her entrance. Please pay attention to the main door.
-（あ……[H名]……）=(Ah... [H名]...)
+（あ……[H名]……）=(Ah... [H名]......)
 視線を向けて、そのまま純白のドレスをまとった[H名]に、心を奪われてしまった。=The moment my eyes landed on her, clad in that snow white wedding dress as she was, I had my heart stolen.
 普段元気いっぱい、という感じの[H名]が、俺のためにウェディングドレスを着て、貞淑に佇んでいる。=Normally so full of energy, [H名] was standing still, exuding pure femininity, wearing the dress she put on for my sake.
 その事実に、俺はただ感動していた。=I was moved by that reality.

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/20/1003/translation.txt

@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
 「この人を守り、笑顔を絶やすことなく幸せにすることを誓いますか？」=protect this woman, and vow to become her happiness?
 「はい、誓います」=Yes, I vow.
 「[H名]さん、あなたはこの男性とお付き合いし、より親密な関係になろうとしております」=Miss [H名], You have been going out with your groom for a while now. And now you are proceeding towards an even closer relationship.
-「……はい、誓います」=...Yes, I vow.
+「……はい、誓います」=.........Yes, I vow.
 「それでは、二人の愛の証として、誓いのキスをお願いします」=Then, without further ado, as the proof of your love, seal these vows with a kiss.
 「……ごめんね。無理に連れて来ちゃったみたいで」=...Sorry. I feel like I dragged you into this.
-「無理にって、別に……嫌々ってわけじゃねーから」="It's not like you dragged me... I'm not doing this unwillingly, you know."""
+「無理にって、別に……嫌々ってわけじゃねーから」=It's not like you "dragged" me... I'm not doing this unwillingly, you know.
 「でも本当によかったよ。[H名]のウェディング姿が見られて」=But, I'm glad I did. I got to see you in a wedding dress.
 「そ、そんな大層なもんじゃねーだろ」=I-It's not that big a deal, is it?
 「ううん、きれいだよ……世界で一番」=No, you really are beautiful... the most beautiful in the world.
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 「あ、う、うん……」=Ah, y-yeah...
 「す、好きだよ。[P名]のこと……世界で一番な」=I-I love you. [P名]... The most in the world.
 「[H名]……ありがとう……もちろん、俺も好きだよ……」=[H名]... Thank you... of course, I love you too...
-「んん……」=Nnn...
+「んん……」=Nnn......
 ………………=.........
 …………=......
 ……=...

translation/en/RedirectedResources/assets/abdata/adv/scenario/c07/20/102/translation.txt

@@ -1,21 +1,21 @@
 「緑の中を歩くのは気持ちいいなー」=It sure feels great to walk amongst greenery~
 「そうだな。風も穏やかで涼しくて、街なかとはやっぱ違うよ」=Yeah. The wind's nice and refreshing too, feels completely different from the city center.
 「そうそう。そんで匂いも違うんだよね。こう、森の香りというか、大地の芳香というか……」=Exactly. The smell is different too, innit? The aroma of forestry, the smell of the earth...
-「……ん、あれ？　このおいしそうな匂いは……？　お、もしかしてあれかな？」=...Nn, huh? What's this appetizing smell...? Oh, is it that?
+「……ん、あれ？　このおいしそうな匂いは……？　お、もしかしてあれかな？」=......Nn, huh? What's this appetizing smell...? Oh, is it that?
 「あっ、移動販売車だ。何売ってんだろ」=Ah--, it's a food stall. Wonder what they're selling.
 「おお、ケバブだ。どうりでいい匂いがするわけだ」=Ooh, it's a doner kebab stall. No wonder it smells so good.
 「せっかくだし、食べていこうよ」=Since we're here anyway, let's grab some.
 「いらないだろ、ケバブなんて、我慢しろ」=We don't need it. Endure the temptation.
 「え～、食べたいな～。ほら、見なよあの肉。うまそ～だな～」=Eh~, I wanna try it though~. Look, Look at that meat. It looks so damn good~
 「……じゅるっ。い、いやっ、うまそうじゃない！　全然うまそうじゃない！」=...*drool*--. N-No--, it doesn't look good! It doesn't look good at all!
 「こ、これは違うぞ！　食べたいわけじゃないからな！」=Y-You've got it wrong! I definitely don't want any!
-「[H名]……。本当は食べたいんだろう？　正直に言ってくれよ」=[H名]... You actually really want some, right? Be honest with me.
+「[H名]……。本当は食べたいんだろう？　正直に言ってくれよ」=[H名]...... You actually really want some, right? Be honest with me.
 「うう……食べたい、けど……[P名]の前でがっついたらみっともないだろ」=Uuu... I do, but... It'd look so bad if I just started stuffing myself in front of you, [P名.
 「お前も、そんな女は嫌だろ？　ケバブってきれいに食べられそうもないし……」=You don't like those sorts of girls either, do you? I don't think I could eat a doner kebab all prettily either...
 「そんなこと気にするわけないだろ。むしろ、たくさん食べてくれたほうが俺は嬉しいよ」=You don't need to bother over stuff like that. If anything, I'd be real happy to see you stuff yourself.
 「本当か！？　そうなのか！？　じゃあ食べよう！　すぐ食べよう！　ほら行くぞ！」=Really!? For real?! Then let's get some! Let's get some right now! Come on, let's go!
 「ちょ、ちょっと、そんなに急がなくたってケバブは逃げないよ」=Y-You don't need rush so much, the doner kebab isn't gonna get up and run away.
-「……ケバブ？　なんだそれは？」="...doner kebab? What's that?"""
+「……ケバブ？　なんだそれは？」=..."doner kebab"? What's that?
 「あれ、[H名]は知らない？　最近、お祭りなんかでもよく見るようになったよ」=Huh, you don't know? Even festivals tend to have doner kebab stalls these days.
 「袋みたいになってるパンに、野菜と肉を入れたサンドイッチみたいな料理だよ。大きな回転する肉を、削ぎ落とすようにして刻むんだ」=They take a large flat piece of bread, fill it with veggies and meat and roll it up like a bag. They shave off a giant cut of meat on a rotisserie into thin shavings and everything.
 「どう？　食べたくならない？」=How about it, feel like grabbing some yet?